Friday, 15 September 2017

We have been learning how to put interesting adjectives and verbs into our writing.
Here are some Spring poems that the children in Room 3 wrote.

Spring…
Wonderful flowers grow.
Fluffy lambs pounce.
Pinky, whitey blossoms bloom.
The hot sun goes down.
I feel hot!

By Isabella






 In Spring…
Lovely flowers bloom.
Cute lambs eat.
Pink blossoms grow.
The hot sun looks down.
I feel lovely

By Arlena








In Spring…
Lovely flowers grow
Fluffy lambs jump.
Pink blossoms shine.
The shiny sun looks down.
I feel happy.

By ka’ze-zah









In Spring…
Lovely flowers grow.
Nice lambs sleep.
Pink blossoms shine.
The hot sun glows.
I feel hot.

By Kouper









In Spring…
Soft flowers bloom.
Nice lambs bounce.
White blossoms shine.
The hot sun glows.
I feel amazing!

By Lachlan









In Spring…
Beautiful flowers grow.
Fluffy lambs cuddle.
Soft blossoms bloom.
The bright sun smiles.
I feel excited.

By Luke









In Spring…
Delicate flowers sway.
Cute lambs cuddle.
Sparkly blossoms shine.
The hot sun looks down.
I feel happy.

By Keanu









In Spring…
Lovely flowers bloom.
Fluffy lambs drink.
Sparkly blossoms open up.
The hot sun smiles.
I feel energetic.

By Indy









In Spring…
Lovely flowers bloom.
Fluffy lambs sleep.
Soft blossoms grow.
The bright sun rises.
I feel hot!

By Neveh









In Spring…
Colourful flowers sprout.
Tiny lambs grow.
Pink blossoms wave.
The shiny sun whizz’s across the sky.
I feel excited.

By Blake








In Spring…
Soft flowers grow.
Fluffy lambs jump.
Delicate blossoms bloom.
The shiny sun rises.
I feel lovely.

By Angus










In Spring…
Soft flowers grow.
Fluffy lambs dance.
White blossoms shine.
The hot sun glows.
I feel hot.

By Jackson








In Spring…
Delicate flowers shine.
Fluffy lambs jump.
Pink blossoms grow.
The shiny sun rises.
I feel happy.

By Cory









In Spring…
Sparkly flowers bloom.
Adorable lambs sleep.
White and pink blossoms bloom.
The hot sun rises.
I feel happy.

By Ranginui









In Spring…
Lovely flowers shine.
Fluffy lambs eat.
Sparkly blossoms bloom.
The bright sun is hot.
I feel happy.

By Kaiden









In Spring…
Soft flowers sway.
Fluffy lambs cuddle.
Pink blossoms open up.
The bright sun glows.
I feel happy.

By Maxi









In Spring
Beautiful flowers sway.
Fluffy lambs sleep.
Pink blossoms bloom.
The sparkly sun glows.
I feel excited.

By Grace










In Spring…
Soft flowers bloom.
Adorable lambs drink.
Pink blossoms shine.
The bright sun glows.
I feel hot!


By Charlotte

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